Thursday, August 28, 2008

Outline Essay "Changes"

Thesis
+pressure may make you commit to some changes in your life that you believe is the correct choice or for the good of others.

Major Point One (School)
+constant pressure of college
+comparison from others (family members, people that I do not even know)

Major Point Two (Family)
+situations with father and mother
+how long pressure lasted, or continued.

Conclusion
+change for others, not for oneself.

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